So I'm writing this story, but the 'editor' thinks that some of the characters act bipolar.
How can I make it so they have proper development of character and not look bipolar, or if they have to act that way, give them a good reason?
Here's an example.
Someone acts as if news on this veryimportantbook is boring them, while they suddenly say "Godspeed" in response to news on the book potentially being stolen.
Looking forward to any ideas!